I am a student. This is a place where I will share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Ollie, you have started to organise your writing in to paragraphs. You used the evidence you found to back up your ideas and argument. Your next step is to keep working on writing paragraphs and structuring these appropriately.
Ollie, you have started to organise your writing in to paragraphs. You used the evidence you found to back up your ideas and argument. Your next step is to keep working on writing paragraphs and structuring these appropriately.
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